day tripper

Guyssss. this is all found out in part twoooooooo (: thank you a lot for the reviews. Like A bunch. I know its kind of harsh (And yes there is ...

HAHAH omg. i loved the reviews. Guys Im a romance writer like crazy this was a goofy thing that I wrote in like five minutes because peyton and i are ...

Thankss:D

WHOA KAT THANK YOU. I completely forgot about this! Eek... that's kind of bad.hahaha I shall start writing Part Four soon;D hehe thanks for the review!

Thank you vury much(:

Oh don't worry I'm not! I'm actually writing some of Chapter 7 right now. I plan on have between 12-16 chapters of this story so it's no where near finished ...

thanks!:D I'm not sure when Peyton starts Chapter 2, but I hope it's soon! I'm excited to see what she comes up with! *bounces in chair with excitement*

Okay, so yesterday I had this LONG LONG review and everything, ....then my mom erased it): Soo, I can't do one now, but when I'm finished my homework I will(:

I didn't get to finish this but this was very good so far. One thing, please please please make this shorter. It's way too long, maybe cut it up to ...

Fixed it. Thanks!(:

Aw this is cutee! It reminds me of my mom, hahaha. I know that sounds weird but she always talks about us (my brother, sister, and I) about growing up ...

in my opinion, a long story is good. but this was a little too long. Maybe put it into two parts? Also, the characters keep switching. Other then that, it ...

This story was unbelievably sweet and it kept me reading. I really liked it, it got to my heart. Good job(: As for critiquing, I agree with all the other ...

This is a little graphic, but that's okay, all writers are not the same. I rather liked this, for once something was from a boy's perspective. (:

To tell you the truth, I was engaged in this the whole way. I dont know how to say it but you are just a very unique writer. I didn't ...